Saturday, October 21, 2006

(877) Fear Of The Unknown Comments

Rating: 3.6

The wind was strong and the dust blew viciously.
Walking on a dirt road, not sure of my destination.
I encountered a coyote standing in the distance. My
first thought was to turn and run and then I
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Melvina Germain
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TJ Daniels 13 November 2006

Melvina, I like everyone else MUST read more... Please? ? ? ? ? Loved reading, but NEED MORE! ! ! ! :) I felt like a child going to the movies to see a serial... And you just can't wait til next week to see the end. Take care. TJ

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Geoff Warden 04 November 2006

leavin' me at seats edge here... please tell some more....

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Tailor Bell 28 October 2006

definitely a seat-grabber...where is my popcorn and part 2. it is the unknown that we fear. strong work. -Tailor

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Kee Thampi 26 October 2006

Fearful as I was, I didn’t want the animal to know my fear. I bravely took step after step and walked toward the road. Finally I reached a crossing in the road. When I turned to look back the coyote was gone. At that point, I felt sure I was safe and continued to walk down the road. When I approached you makes new experiment.....like a saw. story means it uttarence...fit for it

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Diane Violet 24 October 2006

Wow, Melvina this is great. I love a series, looking forward to more on the edge of my seat. All the best, Diane

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 October 2006

YOU'RE TOSSIN' ME CURVEBALLS, YOUNG LADY! ....Two marvelous works, BOTH to be a series? Too good to be true...I have to see more, before I believe it! lol! Another strong penning, Melvina'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 October 2006

Another fascinating story goes on...............And it's a journey? The unpleasant sensation of wild dogs. And predicts furthermore? The unknown is the cause of fear and the soul never knows the destiny?

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Sydney, Nova Scotia
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