(85) First Love Comments

An interesting thought - does DNA have that much memory? Thought provoking verse. Patrick

nature hides from us all these inner workings and the thoughts of a lover, so your question is pertinent and nicely couched in this clever verse. fine read, David. -Tailor

Intriguing poem seeking humanity in the biology of early life, and finding it, I suspect. Clever. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

Sounds a wee bit trepidatious & caustic to me...but intruiging as well...i like it! Nice Work, David'''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR