The afterglow of a dying supernova -
A flash in slo-mo
Blasts across the southern sky
Silhouetting dark stuff
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Stunning David. Love the way you combine the scientific, the philosophical and the artistic - it is distinctive and attractive. Clever penning. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Stellar! With unusual rhyme scheme, too. It works. I see that detailed construction of atmosphere is your trademark... that works too.... t x
Wow Dave I love this! Fantastically written, is it about those starlets now gone... a la.... Marilyn? Or am I reading it wrong? Brilliant though.... HG: -)
Creates a great sense of time and the smallness (almost irrelevence) of man. Patrick