Dead headed
Thunderstruck
Lurching by the
Whining wires
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I wish that everyone who struggles with hopelessness could read this... Hold on to that memory of hope, of possibility... You say it all, both sides, and you say it so veryvery well. Wishing you peace and love, Esther
David, I agree with Alison's comments. I have been thee to the point of no obvious possible return. But climbing out of the hole (or trench) is ... edifying! You touched me. Ross
Atmospheric, determined, optomistic and powerful in that. A fine composition. t x
You sound most definitetly willing Mr Dennis! I like this one, it has an air of positivity about it, just what I needed today. Thank you, I too shall will it! ! HG: -) xx
This is a wonderful piece about the power of mind to pull the body back from the depths of despair. The poem is articulate and well balanced, the images are strong and believable and the conclusion shows courage and resolve. I found it very inspiring. Welcome to Poemhunter. Warmly, Alison.
A very powerful poem here Dennis, the power of the mind is amazing. Thankyou David---Melvina---