(81) Nature Boy Comments

BEAUTIFUL NATURE And every now and then I feel I’d like to be that fool To bare my soul to nature While the pigeons burble “cool” BEAUTIFUL 10+++++++++++++

I LIKE IT. to MyPoemList :)

this one made me laugh for some reason Avery rear occurence treasure it lolz luv, Me.

a very nice piece, well said, well writen.

I love the title of this poem, it certainly fits. Again your imagry is strong, you certainly bring the reader into the poem and that's what makes a great poet. Certainly this poem deserves a big (10) . Thankyou---Melvina---

Nature Boy has a real atmosphere to it and a strong sense of rebellion. Top marks. Patrick

'As teaming hordes of grey brained apes' - Fantastic.

fantastic transference enveloped in rich well structured stanzas. this is that poem for me...the one they say you happen across and wish you had written. super work, David. going to have to read more of your entries. -Tailor

Hmm, I've wished the same thing from time to time. Failing that, the sight of 'foolery' makes for the best moment in a day sometimes. '...teaming hordes of grey brained apes', apt description. I'd rather live in a hovel than sell my soul to finance a McMansion. Lots of food for thought in this seeming piece of fluff. Esther : ]