Hexagonal - Aquamarine
Gemstone of purest rarest hue
The colour of the deep blue sea
Expresses your fidelity
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Expresses your fidelity The depth of love you have for me wonderful poem, very well written 10/10
Hi John, I love the aquamarine stone, very tranquil. Your last stanza has a form all it's own I noticed, I forget what it's called...maybe a pantoum? Not sure I'd have to look that one up where the words are reversed and such...I like the repeat 1st and last lines of the other stanzas too. Very informative too. I also like the fact you draw people in with their birthstones...very good idea! I'll have to wait for July's Ruby :) ~Christine
A beautiful poem for a beautiful month. You have my applause. Always your friend in poetry, Sandra
I concur with Olfa - very informative. All the best, Jacqui
This is a delight to read John - - both informative and highly textured with poetic integrity - - the concept of writing on birthstones is a winner and I am waiting for Aquarius to make it's appearance! Well done John - the lovely Aquamarine is a favourite stone for one such as I who live by the sea. You have given us a gem in this work. - - 10 + + +
Blue is the color of sky, color of sea, color of life, spring and re-birh... a deep and vivid poem! 10 ThanksForSharing WiseMan/