Friday, December 1, 2006

(80) Poolside Comments

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The scent of water splash
On sun baked wood
And sunscreen
Bright water patterns
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David S Dennis
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Melvina Germain 29 January 2007

An excellent poem David, I enjoyed the read.---Melvina---

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Raghavan Warrier 07 December 2006

It is again an excellent write.

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Tailor Bell 01 December 2006

hats are great for shade and other stuff. nice read. -Tailor B.

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