8. Eternal Friendship Comments

great poem, excellent rhyme, very deep delved thoughts.

Absolutely amazing. Each word and each line of this poem comes with an aura of deep thoughtfulness. Thank you very much for this wonderful poem.

A beautiful poem it is.10.

This is a great writing. I wish I could understand it better, so I could give it a ten instead of a nine. GW62

Awesome! Your poem moves with Miltonic dignity. I liked the opening lines: 'The two great friends Birth and Death Conspired for humans, Lament and Breath.' You are a already a great and recognized poet. While commenting on your poems I feel small as if I am showing lamp to the Sun.

Exquisite to Divine... keep righting them One Peace at a time,10derly Deana

A lyrical write of great wisdom and beauty. Time will have us all. But words have the power to last forever. Kindest regards, Sandra

This is a fantastic poem that is very well written. You have captured with words the reality of life. What we must do is make our journey worthwhile. Thank you for sharing

Hello again poet, wow this is an amazing poem, great work! L C Taylor

ye good expression....one eternal dilemma

very good.... has alot of meaning to it.... you are a great poet... keep writing

The natal twinge the infant could never express The soul’s departure nor the body could digress; faces of a coin... wonderful poetic thoughts... regards...

crafted really well...njoyed reading it! ! !

The whole cycle of life written down beautifully and with great poetic prowess. Thank you Abha.

Very well executed poem Abha! A pleasure indeed to read! *10*! ! Best Wishes! Friend Thad

The circle of life, told so well by you in this lovely piece of writing, well done Lynda xx

Plenty of self-realization to this writing that really sets the table for a discussion of enlightenment and death. But here’s the thing: vision-quests, thousands of hours of meditation, the delicate finesse that make euphemisms appealing and wanting in grace, is in its essence, empirically a matter of individual conciousness. You have to credit the rich diversification of Abha's words though, for a well-lit fundamental distinction about the point of life.

This piece, no doubt, in this Reader's mind, could be a school-text paradigm as to when couplet stanzaec structure is aproppriate & enhancing to its body of work. Death is Renaissance di excelscior....as it represents the nascence of a new, but ever-life....as opposed to our microcosmed time spent toiling in mortal life. ''ETERNAL FRIENDSHIP ', sheds positive light on the spirituality of Death....as there is nothing bella-grande, about th' inevitible process of aging: mentally, physically or aesthetically.This is fine work, as always, young lady....You are truly a gifted scribe. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

well written. Death is as necessary for a man's growth as life itself.

Great Poem, Yet simple. thanx 4 sharing. regards!