from my bed
I watch
3 birds
on a telephone
...
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Blunter than a broken pencil....Sillier than a bag full of hammers...So fantastically Charles Bukowski.... there was only 1 of him.
Amusing expression. Beautiful poem. Well deserved as modern poem of the POD.
An innovative value addition with the fantastic flight of imagery. Well deserved modern poem of the Day.
Watching the birds! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Blunter than a broken pencil....Sillier than a bag full of hammers...So fantastically Charles Bukowski.... there was only 1 of him.
What a laugh I gotout of this poem. His personality just shot through.
one flies off. then another. one is left, then it too is gone. great expression great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Excellent poetic expression as also observation and reaction to it.
My comment appears to have been censored. On a poetry site? ? ?
A long-time fan of Bukowski, I first read this poem many, many years ago. I only thought of it today because I inadvertently wrote the sentence just thought I'd let you know, in a letter to a friend. It was to find 8 Count in it's entirety here.
Looks like writer's block. While he spent the full 8 couint on the canvas many times, the body of his work gives the rest of us inspiration to keep punching.
I love his honesty and bluntness. As sad as the message may be at times, his writing often seems to include an element of humor.
Ha, you have to appreciate his blunt honesty, if nothing else. I like this one.
This poem will age well. In 100 years from now a person will STILL lol at this one.