8 A.M. Comments

This is a wonderful evocation of spring's freshness, annual rush of of renewed life in us. I like this poem for focusing on Nature, the human character is there as a sounding board for the natural wonders. In fact. it's as if the world of nature is flooding into our narrow human lives. The woman is definitely the finger pointing as in the Zen poem about the moon. She is not the focal point but you damatize her accurately as our guide to the mystery of wat - well, the surge of life giving energy.