Tuesday, December 2, 2008

797. As An Infant Cries, I Cry, I Cry And I Cry. 021208 Comments

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How will I tell my sorrow?
To whom will I tell my sorrow?

Heart breaks, body shudders
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Raman Savithiri
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Vinod Kumar 14 December 2008

A very good expression of inner emotional storm, depth, and waves, without showing any symtems externally, that was great Thank you for sharing.

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Omar Ali Sabar 12 December 2008

Wow Raman that was really spectacular.. a great flurry of words and questioning of oneself. The self is a really dark subject for me especially so I appreciate this innermost heartfelt piece...10 to you dear

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 December 2008

Knocks me from inside To wake me up crfted lines. as if written by a student of litterature.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 December 2008

Very often, tears lighten a heart. The poem reveals the heaviness of a suffering heart that cries for relief thro' tears and words of sorrow.

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rajagopal haran 03 December 2008

this being your 100 th poem, has come off very well as a master piece...your self enquiry methodology is great

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Christopher Lee 03 December 2008

a sincere cry; Jesus bless you...wonderful concept

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Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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