Saturday, November 4, 2006

(790) Betrayed Comments

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Waiting at the train station with no shoes.
I felt I had reason to sing the blues.
A story as wild and crazy as this,
makes me want to give you my fists
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Melvina Germain
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Pia Andersson 11 November 2006

Some people are just no good...users who in the end get very lonely...your poem upsets me..no one should have to experience this..Pia

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Nimal Dunuhinga 09 November 2006

It's very difficult to judge a person from afar and betraying is the worst sin a man makes in his lifetime. The betrayer really is an actor in this life-drama and you should be very careful in dealing with an actor. Well versed poem Melvina.

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Brian Dorn 07 November 2006

'Sweet talk and good looks' can blind almost anyone. Excellent write, Melvina... a real heart breaker. Brian

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glen still 04 November 2006

just remember not to do it again...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2006

SOMETIMES GOOD LOOKS IS ALL YOU GET, EVEN THOUGH YOU DESERVE ALL THE BEST OF WHAT IS MOST IMPORTANT...GUESS THATS WHERE THAT OLE SAYIN' THAT STILL GOES ROUND TODAY, CAME FROM'BEAUTY 'S ONLY SKIN DEEP'...'TWAS A 'ELL OF A TEMPTATIONS HIT BACK IN 1964..., LOVED TH' MOTOWN SOUND...GREW UP ON IT & STILL CRAVE IT ON CD......GREAT WORK, MELVINA.....STRAIGHT FROM TH' HEART ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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