Friday, August 18, 2006

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Born of innocence,
to this vast universe.
Nurtured by parents,
played with our friends.
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Melvina Germain
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Brian Dorn 28 September 2006

Based on your work, and so many others here at poemhunter, it is obvious that seior citizens have plenty to offer. Great write, Melvina! Brian

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Tailor Bell 20 August 2006

encouraging message, Melvina. lingering on the struggle. nice work. -Tailor

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Ernestine Northover 19 August 2006

Sweet poem with a long life ahead of it. Very well expressed and constructed. A pleasure to read it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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