Born of innocence,
to this vast universe.
Nurtured by parents,
played with our friends.
...
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encouraging message, Melvina. lingering on the struggle. nice work. -Tailor
Sweet poem with a long life ahead of it. Very well expressed and constructed. A pleasure to read it. Love Ernestine XXX
Based on your work, and so many others here at poemhunter, it is obvious that seior citizens have plenty to offer. Great write, Melvina! Brian