(735) Lost Desperate Whore-Walk With Me Comments

YIKES! very captivating poem. but, i'd like to hear this person's story: David Tanguay (1/8/2007 6: 41: 00 PM) Sorry Melvina, but this poem does't fit in this world.It isn't real that's my honest opinion, someone who walked that road, when the road was real i wonder if he is still alive and on PH. i see it was 2007. this shall go to MyPoemList. i especially appreciated: Won’t you take me by the arm, lift me if you can, or would you shy away leaving me here- and One day a hose will blow my way, I shall fall to the ground, swept away like waste in a barn, I’ll lay dead and mutilated. bri ;)

Melvina...Another gritty poem about life on the street...well done! ! Hugs, Dee

You don't pull any punches, Melvina... hard hitting and blunt. Good write. Brian

Sorry Melvina, but this poem does't fit in this world.It isn't real that's my honest opinion, someone who walked that road, when the road was real

You touch a human being and your walk is worth than a mile because you feel the real heart beat. She is a friend you called what a beauty of that fine word?

You walk a fine-line tightrope 'tween prose & poetry once in awhile...like here.However you pull it off with a dexterity of smoothness...Avery fine storyline & delivery, Melvina