Sunday, August 26, 2007

73 - Hotel In New York City Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mini bar empty
Metallic wrapper sweets
Ghost ships riding the hotel sheets
Tv crashed out
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nicola burkett
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Brian Dorn 28 August 2007

Lots of neat lines in this, Nicola... another great poem, and thanks for the 'spectacular view.'

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Sandra Fowler 26 August 2007

Written with style and a flair for the dramatic. Excellent write, Nicola. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Tai Chi Italy 26 August 2007

This is a very good snap shot of the debaucery that New York City represents in this twenty first century of disposable people and mass consumerism. Loved the 13th floor line! lol Unlucky for some. Guilt and pitty are our two most despised emotions. Both worthless but both intrinsickly human. Nice write Nicola...Smiling at you Tai, in de skies as Aciiiiiiiiid Test

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