Friday, January 11, 2008

(707) Living Our Truth Comments

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We are the perfect couple to the outside world,
with precious children, a boy and a girl.
A white picket fence surrounds our home,
our thoughts wander, our eyes roam.
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Melvina Germain
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okeydokey #3 12 January 2008

wow..that sucks...real bad...someone needs to read...Leviticus 20: 13...and 1 Corinthians 6: 9...and definitely get..their passions straight...

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David Harris 11 January 2008

Mel, although as I read this a sadness engulfed me for them that they never had the courage to tell one another the truth until it was impossible not to. You've mentioned this is a true story. The sad part it happens so often where couples remain together sometimes they think for the right reasons and put on a facade to their family and friends and their loved ones hoping it will not hurt. But when the truth is finally revealed someone always gets hurt. A beautifully written and sensitive poem that will capture the heart of all who read it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. David

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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