Friday, February 22, 2019

707. Fallen Unicorn Comments

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Rays of light from the full moon shine through the trees
the black unicorn hides in the shadows
cursed and unloved by all for straying off the path
even its own mother wouldn't recognise it now
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Jaden Knight
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2019

This fantasy you have described very well. The pure colour falls with beauty from full moon. This poem is rich in imagery and this has greatest breath. It seeks a way to end its torment but leaves wait to darkness to reset and shine through moonbeam. Words of great promise is nourished. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem...10

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