*701 Inequality Of Life Comments

You all get deported

Prepare to be imported.

Prepare to be deported.

The stringent structure of this poem helps to explain God's stringent conditions upon life. We all profit from the grace of our fathers, and suffer for their sins. It is the continuum of life. All is in all. And all, no matter how poor, may know God. This is enough to improve each condition.

Perfect poem, I found through the verses a very mature and wise poet. And yes Mr. John, the life is full of contrasts, and every person is living in a total different world from the other. TEN

A contemplative poem…fodder for psyche…masterly brewed…but 1 question? All whys are unanswerable …and indeed not required …only we need action…It’s the selfanswering…and that is the remedy pH 7 to oneself… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

that's life! life is difference in everything....... its colour is Black but sometimes is Pink....... someones cry and someones sing...... some ships sail and other ones sink...... ThanksForSharing WiseMan/

Some of the inequalities of society expressed in rhymes and rhythm that make the failings and inequalites to not seem so bad in all its truth...yet the message is clear.A 10+++ thanks for inviting me to read this lovely poem with its class-you're great! ! !

John this has all the elelments of the song but with more because the verse outlines the conditions which all decent folk would want relieved. An outcry like this against wrongs needs to be read world-wide. Thank you for the reminders John.

As John Kennedy once said, 'Life is unfair'. Many have no one to lift up a prayer for them. We should do so every day. Praise for your compassionate heart. This is a lovely write.10++ Kind wishes, Sandra

what a wonderful world....a beautiful piece of clouds of white...i love the lines...happy valentine.........smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeee