Friday, June 8, 2007

(700) I Had A Dream Comments

Rating: 3.6

I had a dream, a pleasant dream,
of a place filled with lush green grass.
A place with crystal running falls,
with trees and mountains so very tall.
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Melvina Germain
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Liz Elizabeth 06 August 2007

some dreams do come true.....but some didn't...dreams was broken when i lost my ticket for the trip to KOREA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! anyway, hope more from you^_^

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Kathup Tsering 18 June 2007

one special dream with art of poem! so wonderful!

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David Darbyshire 15 June 2007

Your dream reminds me of Canada years ago haha...dream On Melvina Dave xxx

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Asma Bahrainwala 13 June 2007

these all have sure become a kind of dream now! ... another good poem... Asma...

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Meggie Gultiano 11 June 2007

We share the same sentiments. Another work for the love of a beautiful scenery.Let us work together to build a new place, with our ONE VOICE AND ONE SONG..lovely poem, like you

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Chelsi Ruffing 11 June 2007

That was a great poem. Very well done.

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Meghan - 11 June 2007

Isn't it sad to know that basically everyone shares the same dream yet, we cannot make it reality? very sad indeed. anyway though beautiful write, I read it as if it came from my own mind. Meghan

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Oh wow! Poignant and deeply well-thought out; whilst witty and topical. Martin Luther King eat your heart out. t x

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David Harris 10 June 2007

Melvina, another wonderful poem about the dangers our green and fertile planet is getting exposed to everyday. I just wish your dream could come true. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Risha : Ahmed 10 June 2007

A wonderful poem..Yes... A subject close to my heart and I want new technologies to get along with nature. Love.................................................Risha

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Theresa Moore 10 June 2007

A memory of times gone by...when the earth was free of pollution.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 June 2007

Sounds like england.. You touch on the Environment, Melvina.. A topic which seems to be close to your heart..

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Edna Javelosa 08 June 2007

excellent...and what a beautiful dream for clean air and environment..

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JoAnn McGrath 08 June 2007

I'd like to go there......sounds like a wonderful place...: O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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