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VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM NOT SEEN MANY WHERE HAVE YOU BEE POETESS CHILD

A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Really an insightful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

A beautiful poem. Well-knit. Amazing flow of words. Yes Prabir Gayen Sir is a spiritual teacher his poetry is highly philosophical. Great write!

viscous ** or vicious ***? ** " having a thick, sticky consistency between solid and liquid" *** " deliberately cruel or violent" Line 4, how about: " ....cause, unknown...." OR: " ....cause known..." ? " bevel" ? " vatic**** soul" ? **** " describing or predicting what will happen in the future" a transformation! your outlook AND your looks; did a barber cut it? bri :)

The magic flow of an open heart! Absolutely stunning poetic expression!

A magnetic force! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A beautiful bouquet of gratitude to the one who changed the course of your life. In desperation when you were groping in the dark, he came as a ray of hope! Your meeting with him must have been providential! When all doors are shut, somewhere opens a new door! This experience is the boost to live! A great tribute to Prabir Gayyen and a powerful poem! A 10

Similar to the heart felt exhortations of Prabir Gayyem. Whenever deep sadness and pain conspire, a ray of light of inner being shines through despite.

AFTER A MONTH COMPARE BOTH VERSIONS FOLLOW THE ONE U ARE BEST AT THEN TAKE THAT STREAM OF LINE THAT IS THEN UR POETIC LINE OR VIBE ASK pg now he also reads lesser of me STALE WE ALL BECOME WHEN THE CURTAIN IS DONE

you may stick to SPIRITUALITY IT ALONE PAYS DIVIDENDS ON PH ASK PG

Very beautiful poem..10000000000++++///////+++++++

Then became my ladder to stand, From the deep chasm it took my vatic soul; Into the Sunlight andthe open Air, The wideanduninterruptedspaceof SKY, The Space of my inner being and my Life. ********

fell without fail with strange reverence, Fell, fell and fell, , , Not in, but in Love, And Love Then became my ladder to stand, ...very beautiful lines

He, a magnetic force, A sweet serenity, and a childish joy... Core lines

Looking at the flame I felt love with woe, For an unknown state of recognition, .. ..... invention

Instantly a ray came onto my Being, Anda flame from inside my fed up self, The self that was consumed burned with pain, my being with unknown fire and Joy startled, .....so deep

Even no wish to discover myself, From the deepest dungeon bevel world, Nothing arose in me to assert Self, A vagrant soul and a vagabond mind, With nodirection to make my journey, Only monotony thesolidified ding, I was preparing for myself as One, Lost and lost within grave of self delusion... ....... beautiful

No one was seen and unseen was my dream, I was lost, so lost in darkness and room, No thought came to find me out of Myself, searching was tiring and no wave was formed,

I was watching as a lonely witness, My own self deserting me, futility... Like stagnant water with Rotten leaves...

I sat in a corner of my dark room, perpetual darkness with infernal chaos, A lost soul with a viscous brain and heart, tormented without cause unknown to my being,