if i open up my brain nerves
and spread it all across the globe
half of the muscles have your name
the other half held your memories
...
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The intensity of emotions of hatred show that wounds received from... were quite grievous. Wonderful imagery and beautiful rhyme. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10+
7 wounds... and you've showed it well with a pain dripping heart. The poem is so intense, each line is full of pure emotion. Great write Vishal!