Monday, November 9, 2015

7 Wounds Comments

Rating: 4.8

if i open up my brain nerves
and spread it all across the globe
half of the muscles have your name
the other half held your memories
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Vishal Sharma
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Sanjukta Nag 10 November 2015

7 wounds... and you've showed it well with a pain dripping heart. The poem is so intense, each line is full of pure emotion. Great write Vishal!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 November 2015

The intensity of emotions of hatred show that wounds received from... were quite grievous. Wonderful imagery and beautiful rhyme. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10+

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The chinmay 09 November 2015

emotional poetry.... very well written... I love it

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