Monday, February 19, 2007

((7) Swan Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never knew I would be a long distance runner.

I´ve lost the drive to win
and my voice has become sweet.
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Indira Renganathan 03 February 2010

Ofcourse there is a melody inner playing....soothing beauty....thank you

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Kings Gambit Accepted...beautiful piece Luis...i love every word inside this write...10

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Duh Huh 21 May 2009

And won it you have, with the flair and finesse with which the poem was written. Well done mi amigo. :)

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Arwen Lee CW 03 October 2008

A black swan Beyond our knowledge without white feathers dances gracefully....

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Meggie Gultiano 11 February 2008

Luis, this is beautiful! i love the gentle flow of words here, soothing..and i feel i was the one playing the game..Top marks, of course!

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Joscephine Gomez 29 April 2007

I feel the excitement in this game, the passion of a chess player and your determination to win. I feel like playing chess with you.

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Sandra Fowler 03 March 2007

Immeasurable sadness powerfully expressed. You have a way with words. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Very detailed! Nice...it caught my interest...it's now on my favorite poems list! ! ! Love Cupcake! ! ! !

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Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente

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