Love is Eternal they always say
More than that is proved in a day,
It is wonderful to be in Love
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NICE USAGE OF RHYMES...AND U HAVE GIVEN OUT A WONDERFUL MESSAGE... :)
Abha, is one of the greatest of writers. Even though English is not her first language, she knows how to use the English words to their greatest effect when she puts them together. I admire her talent. GW62
love is one thing we cannot say i have no more. the more give, more your heart expands. lovely poem Abha mamta
In Love a different world is sighted All the evils thoughts are blighted, This is really true but how many of us want to feel that love only few of us who are very lucky on this earth and they really do their best for others. Everybody learns something but nobody wants to learn love because of lack of time. They are unlucky those who can not feel it. If they will start feeling then devil will make his way away from us.
So simple words with perfect rhyme, rhythm and meter directly appeal the heart of the reader. It has its music too. Love has its multiple hues, In every hue there is new clue, It relieves the world from blues, The whole world does in love fuse.
dear abha, your poem o'wonderful love is abeautiful nerration of love with deep insight of life.
What a beautifull description of the emotion Love brings, and how the enlightment can make all around us happy, Too bad we couldnt bottle this and the world would be a much happier place..... Excellent! !
To fall in love is a physical as well as mental feeling. This poem explains it well. As to the Almighty's role in it, this is well explained in 'The Divine Comedy' by Dante Alighieri.
Love and its multifaceted character is perhaps the most written about. It is difficult to write about this subject and keep yourself above cliche. You have done just that. You have breathed a fresh breath of life into this most 'dealt with' subject. Take care... Leonard
A love poem to love itself Abha a wonderful tribute to the most basic of human emotions may there always be love in your life as long as there is love in your heart
who can be in love these days, , , sucha difficult task, , , , good poem
A lovely flowing poem with a great message. Well done. Andrew
very good write..... some people need to know the difference between love and like though... if you end up with someone you only like and hurt the one you love, you are in trouble.....love hurtz.....love diez....love sux......love gone......no more love ----*over and out, the devilz work is done*-------------
Absolutely beautiful work, Abha! you possess real talent! Lilly :)
Love is Eternal they always say More than that is proved in a day these are the lines i feel means the most...indeed an amazing poem thatt deserves a ten...keep it up abha
This poem reminded me 'Love is Strong ', recently read. A worth to read from Richard-Francis-Burton... Its in PH. Please read it.
Now, this work, aside from being virtually of perfect metre, more importantly is a textbook example of when & how couplets should be employed....Your choice to do so, lends much bonus quality value to an already fine effort. Good creative instincts! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
'So, fill this world with the message of DOVE Like Almighty’s everlasting ‘Unconditional’ LOVE ' PROFOUND....thanks for sharing
A sort-of search-engine of love smartly evoked upon here. I personally find some subtle requisites of compassionate emotions in this poem that resonate in carefully tender inferences. But, the sense of ecstasy seems to be the real halo of this writing.
excellent, wonderful of worlds and rhyme.A very deep and sensuous message.