Friday, June 27, 2008

7 Minutes Comments

Rating: 3.5

7 minutes.

That's all I needed
To remeber how it fit it.
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Crystal Hayes
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 June 2008

There is a lot of rhyme in here, but there seems to be very little pattern or rhythm to the poem. I think it is pretty good but it could be better. GW62

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