Do you feel the pain of nails, thrust through your tender hands,
Do you feel those evil thorns, a crown twisted in bands,
The excruciating agony, of iron pierced through your feet,
The shame of being spat upon, on a Roman pebbled street,
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If your heart, spirit, mind and soul, have never felt His sword, Then without doubt my friend, “You know not…my precious Lord...........it is lovely feeling and sadness is visibly reflecting in lines... one who is close to lord may know all this feelings and act too.....beautiful....10 read mine...o, lord...humble submission....prayer...prayer for friend....go bacl....
This is on the crucifixion of Jesus, it is expressed with depth.
The Lord is my sheppard.......and a nice poem of his suffering and a showing of your faith....++++10 regards
Can't say I have Alf, I'm a contented agnostic. Cheers, Jerry
A beautiful praise poem. I respect all religions, even those before 4 centuries ago for they too praised their Gods. You are a true poet of your faith who wrote this lovely poem from the depth of your belief and spirit. a 10 \welcome back Alf
Thanks for the invitation to read and enjoy this wonderful poem. It is excellent. I will move this to my favorites list......... J. l.
sorry Alf, this is well written but against my belief that God brings us joy and happiness, the need to suffer is an old myth
He is not only the God of Suffering but also the God of glory, surely he would come with his blazing glory.........a good write.........
such a nice and lovely composition. full of faith and love for the Lord. thanks alot for sharing this wonderful piece with all. take care
That is a very moving poem Alf, so well woven together and a joy to read. His glorification on the cross was the ultimate pain but it had to happen so that the Lord was whole again in heaven, and could lead us to everlastine life. A wonderful thing that we should treasure. He did it for all mankind with love. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
An excellent write....it touched my heart and my conscience upon reading this. A well written verses with powerful reminder and messages..................10
Dear Alf - You have written the truth & written it so well... the pain we feel cannot compare. Thank God for Jesus who took our cross to bare... thank you for reminding us as we do so need constant reminders. God bless you dear friend xx
well, poet and the christian fellow... am speachless to your acreation also your writings so very well penned poems luwi
An excellent thought put in grand verses! Yes. You have rightly presented the theme. Man is never reflective this way and this is the reason for today's pitfalls. Well said.
A poem of passion and faith and the questions work really well. It is great to have you back. I believe there have been many prophets to spread the word of God and Christ is revered by so many. A skillful poem with extremely vivid imagery. 10 love Karin
wow this speaks to me thnks for sharing n fanastic job 10++ kept it up
Powerfull religious poem with a ubiquous sense of faith and fate.10