7 Deadly Sins (Pt 2) Comments

NOTE: This is the second part of 7 Deadly Sins. The punishments have been taken from Dante’s 'Inferno' and the Greek’s beliefs. They both had punishments for most of these sins and I took either a combination of the punishments or I took the one I thought see fit. I stated in the first one that I know that this is a controversial topic but I am not trying to intimidate, harass, or offend anyone. This is a very important poem to me and I will take any comments, questions and/or suggestions to make this piece its very best.

Her passion determined her life
Chastity was thrown away
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