Wednesday, July 11, 2007

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in the deep recess
far away from the light
lives a neanderthral.
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samyak jain
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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

I am reading it today and the incident came alive as if just happened... metaphorically well said

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Mat Masters 04 August 2007

I really enjoy the deeper meanings your poems have contained thus far. You definitely have a talent.

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Gold Flower 19 July 2007

This is a beautiful poem! I like the amount of similes! Perfect! Keep writing! ♥ Lilly ♥

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Malini Kadir 17 July 2007

Resilient mumbai! excellent work! keep it up!

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Shivapriya Surve 16 July 2007

I like the unusual similie here..a good one and very original like all your poems!

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Indira Babbellapati 12 July 2007

yes aasiq, nothing dies for nothing 'lives.'

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