in the deep recess
far away from the light
lives a neanderthral.
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I really enjoy the deeper meanings your poems have contained thus far. You definitely have a talent.
This is a beautiful poem! I like the amount of similes! Perfect! Keep writing! ♥ Lilly ♥
I like the unusual similie here..a good one and very original like all your poems!
I am reading it today and the incident came alive as if just happened... metaphorically well said