Friday, February 15, 2008

(692) Thoughts Of You Comments

Rating: 3.1

I sing the blues when no else will listen
Call to the skys while the morning dew on window sills glisten
Sad as I may be, my heart is still on fire
For thoughts of you creates an innermost desire.
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Melvina Germain
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

desire to be desired, lovely.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 19 February 2008

I love these short poems as well! So little words that just say SO MUCH! Keep singing as you have a Great rich voice that is so unique.Wish I heard you sing again. (hint hint) Amazing imagery and just a gem of a poem... Thanx 4 sharing Mel... hug. Love Shell

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David Harris 17 February 2008

Mel, as Andy so rightly said, this is short and sweet, but with a wonderful message embedded in it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 February 2008

Short but so sweet Mel, passionate too...10

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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