Wednesday, November 25, 2009

692. Chisel ‘i’ To ‘you’! 001009 Comments

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Farmer blocks the holes in channel
Water won’t flow into rat’s chamber!
Stream goes directly to paddy field
Making paddy grow to a wealthy yield!
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Raman Savithiri
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 25 November 2009

your ideas are related and ordered in a very good way, your words are well chosen, your tone is very convincing and you've made a great use of descriptive language, I just love the poem, well done

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Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
Raman Savithiri
Raman Savithiri
Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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