(690) In The Beginning Comments

fantastic poem. A great read. Thanks for sharing this poem. Loved the way it ends, so sudden.

this had a nice twist to it.... i like!

Say, what an unsuspected twist at the conclusion. The approach is one of a delicate hand and sweet heart at play. Warmest regards, Greg

this was fun but even with the surprise of the hat, still somehow a little sad. -Tailor

Loved it. I loved the ending, very funny but sad somehow. Hats are very intimate things, and are very hard to throw away. Love Ernestine XXX