Saturday, January 12, 2008

(689) You Can'T Touch Me Comments

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You Can’t Touch Me

You can’t touch me
I have the strength of dolphins soaring o’re the sea
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Melvina Germain
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The repetition works wonderfully, it's a very empowering poem from my view. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and will be back for more. Thank you for posting, L&T

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Cecil Hickman 18 January 2008

I know I can't touch you since you live so far away, , , I know funny Ha Ha, , , this here shows your strength and power which flows in every line, , , blessings my friend...Cecil

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Sandra Fowler 14 January 2008

Bold, brave, and beautiful. This one has my applause. Warm regards, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 14 January 2008

another wow from me! powerful lines, powerful words from a very powerful woman here in PH

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David Harris 13 January 2008

Mel, WOW! You certainly have been on a roll of late. Another beautiful gem to add to your collection. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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JoAnn McGrath 12 January 2008

BOY: O) ...you are on a roll tonight...Good to see you at it's finest: O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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