Saturday, January 12, 2008

(681) Love (Acrostic) No.2 Comments

Rating: 3.0

Lying beside you, watching you sleep.

Owning the moment, I began to weep.
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Melvina Germain
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Cecil Hickman 18 January 2008

another beautifully written poem with such detail of feelings in so few lines, , blessings...Cecil

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 13 January 2008

Amazing and Beautiful! You in those few words just described how I felt just this morning...for this poem I Thank you. 11stars... Have a Great one!

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David Harris 13 January 2008

Mel, what a beautiful poems. Each line tells its own story. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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