Saturday, July 11, 2009

    When Words Become Sigh Comments

Rating: 4.2

Her jocand company was he…. Going back in a vacant mood…..For good! Knowing sweet promises broken ….. Faithful love no more…. Burnt core! ........Said- no more… Knoweth that beauteous morning….No quetch from my side…. Sure, I can’t let my love spotted impure…Wishes mine not immix…. I am a phoenix……!

Her serene eyes tearful…. Never thought…….Would be painful so….Said- don’t go….Dear! do not let me...! She is in sahara desert alone ah….. Said- I know I did wrong……Even so you are my song…. whimsically I stood against my conscience…. Yes, knoweth that beauteous morning….Above all….You are loved by me……Come back my Love!
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sarwar chowdhury
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Anand Madhukar 13 September 2009

An innovative style complements love that flows out of each syllable of this poem.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 01 September 2009

Jilt in love is often bear gloss and glitter in metaphysical plane like Radha and Krishna! Poet has concluded that way. Ten gladly and cograts for being in QL of PH dr. sakti

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

hey i m reading this for the second time.. loved this one.. you can write great love stories.. these things are filled with emotions..... i mean i did comment on this one before... loved it again! ! !

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Catrina Heart 22 July 2009

Just as an innovative wonderful write.............Lovely! ! !

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

wow. very creative. i love your wording. a very amazing piece of work. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! 10+

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Luis Gil 19 July 2009

Emotive and beautiful. Thanks

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Marilyn Lott 18 July 2009

A poem full of depth and soul. Interesting! Marilyn

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Christina Phan 16 July 2009

beautiful one kept it up 10+++

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Cristy Upshaw 16 July 2009

intriguing piece and title. words do in the end become a whispered sigh, such as with any breath one takes. well penned.

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Bob Blackwell 16 July 2009

Words become a sigh, intriguing title, fluid use of words make an interesting poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2009

attractive poem title Sarwar...compelling to read...inside love soaked lines...emotion rich...thanks...10

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~ Jon London ~ 15 July 2009

Liked the structure to this Sarwar my friend....solid craftsmanship....the emotion pounds into the heart with this well composed piece.....great show of your talent Sir 10++

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Little Hatila ;) 15 July 2009

nice poem Sarwar, i liked the style.... Hataw

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Aparna Sinha 14 July 2009

Rich! ! in content..in expression and in the message... nicely done!

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Lynda Robson 14 July 2009

An emotion filled poem, when words become a sigh, well written Sarwar 10 Lynda xx

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Joseph Poewhit 13 July 2009

Words have an impacting emotion to them.

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gurka khan 13 July 2009

such rich vocabulary, and great style too, kudos to u.

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Sanjib Das 12 July 2009

You weave a poem-a poem in new style-a style which is own-comletely your own-own emotion-an emotionwhich you cannot suppress-a suppress fact becomes a good poem-your poem is an immortal one.

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Sandra Fowler 12 July 2009

Praise for your rich vocabulary and your romantic, expressive style. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 July 2009

Beautiful emotional write. When words become sigh, nothing remains to describe.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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