Her jocand company was he…. Going back in a vacant mood…..For good! Knowing sweet promises broken ….. Faithful love no more…. Burnt core! ........Said- no more… Knoweth that beauteous morning….No quetch from my side…. Sure, I can’t let my love spotted impure…Wishes mine not immix…. I am a phoenix……!
Her serene eyes tearful…. Never thought…….Would be painful so….Said- don’t go….Dear! do not let me...! She is in sahara desert alone ah….. Said- I know I did wrong……Even so you are my song…. whimsically I stood against my conscience…. Yes, knoweth that beauteous morning….Above all….You are loved by me……Come back my Love!
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Jilt in love is often bear gloss and glitter in metaphysical plane like Radha and Krishna! Poet has concluded that way. Ten gladly and cograts for being in QL of PH dr. sakti
hey i m reading this for the second time.. loved this one.. you can write great love stories.. these things are filled with emotions..... i mean i did comment on this one before... loved it again! ! !
wow. very creative. i love your wording. a very amazing piece of work. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! 10+
intriguing piece and title. words do in the end become a whispered sigh, such as with any breath one takes. well penned.
Words become a sigh, intriguing title, fluid use of words make an interesting poem.
attractive poem title Sarwar...compelling to read...inside love soaked lines...emotion rich...thanks...10
Liked the structure to this Sarwar my friend....solid craftsmanship....the emotion pounds into the heart with this well composed piece.....great show of your talent Sir 10++
Rich! ! in content..in expression and in the message... nicely done!
An emotion filled poem, when words become a sigh, well written Sarwar 10 Lynda xx
You weave a poem-a poem in new style-a style which is own-comletely your own-own emotion-an emotionwhich you cannot suppress-a suppress fact becomes a good poem-your poem is an immortal one.
Praise for your rich vocabulary and your romantic, expressive style. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
Beautiful emotional write. When words become sigh, nothing remains to describe.
An innovative style complements love that flows out of each syllable of this poem.