(607) Caught In The Act Comments

YOUR EYES ARE LIKE A CAMERA CAPTURE HIM AS HE DID YOU

Loved the sensuality, loved the twist at the end, loved the comments of the fellow poets. Well done!

Another amazing piece! All I can say is WOW! You read it to me before but truly I forgot about it and was amazed at how Amazingly well U wrote such a provocative intrigueing thought provoking piece of poetry. Brilliant Melvina-Brilliant.......Thank U. Please keep up the marvelous work.ten out of 10! ! ! ! Another fave! ! =Shelley=

Melvina, as many of the others have said, excellent poem. I also loved the twist at the end. Take care. TJ P.S. I finally had some free time. :)

Wonderful Melvina, I love the twist in this provocative write. All the best, Diane

No wonder you like my composition Melvina, you are also very sensitive and expression in your poems, sensual very romantic and sexy! .. you are best! keep writng!

A shocker! Another great write!

love the 'zinger' at the end. sensually endowed with entrancing heat. -Tailor

Excellent Melvina. Definitely my style of poem, with that nice 'kick' at the end. Very well done, and a pleasure to read. Nice one. Love Ernestine XXX

This was very funny - a voyeuristic surprise.