Makayla you have to change.
I listened to what God told me.
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ive had tons of those conversations. none of them were able to stick with me all that well but i hope its different for you. faith is a hard thing to come by
I very much enjoy the idea you've broached here, a conversation with God. It's a great concept but I think you could make this a truly fantastic piece by expanding upon the idea! Good job.
I really like this, not so much as a poem, but I really like your attitude. What you figured out, what God told you, is what so many people can't see, and what so many people refuse to believe. If everyone could find others that care about them, then the world could be a much better place.
i was right abt u as a poetess. ur a great one. keep on doing and always try ur best, as u do now. thank u
Look right in front of you, you'll see happiness - writing poetry is that gentle and peaceful happiness - it is finding yourself.
There comes such moments in life when one feels terribly alone and insecure yet if one repents for what he or she had done in the past, one can really recoup with the will of God and get back to the normalities of life with a new vision and a pragmatic approach.....This poem should render all those people to think who may well have lost and got directionless........10/10
oh that is greatest gift from God, the trust in Him simply leads with kindly light...and you been blessed....and this is my gift...10++++, thanks for sharing
divine revealation.. I am glad you had your 60 seconds with God profound message!
OMG....I know exactly what your feeling here....because I felt it apoint in my life to....and although I had tough times...God has helped me to. I love it 10+...
hope u understand wht yr so called GOD has told u........coz u don't seem to listen to what yr friends say....: (
what God would have told you, could be trust yourself, i believe...nobody is alone in this world as long as we think we aren't alone...good write, Makayla...thoughts/emotions pouring out...10
Hey g/f, I really liked this because not only is it true but it is very inspirational too. A 10+++++ for subject matter and the deep feelings you have inside for writing this. Love & hugs, Barbara
Really true! you have lots of people that care about you and i am one. good message, great point!
Life lies ahead. Past shows the path. You got a right message. CP
well done..good what you did..all we need to have that time with God
Nothing is straight anymore. Not even Makayla 😃