Its been 6 weeks since you last called.
Its been 6 weeks since I last slept.
The nights, they just fly by without you here.
How can I ever live without you?
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Its a nice work with good imagery, like ''its been 6 weeks since i last slept'' an exaggeration(hyperbole) , and a strong philosophic sentence like ''the person who made up all the lies has his own plans that we can not control'' its a great work keep it up
wow its breath taking ik how you feel but its me who just hates life and not tthe people in it but ur an amazing writer plz read my poems plz and by the way amazing job u did amzing