6- The Moon Was Burning Comments

Good poem with a lot of good images, descriptive words, action, and things to be imagined. Your style is fresh and gets the reader's attention.

very intense poem the imagery very powerful and a betrayal of passion. Hope your freinds heart pang heals with time

some words and phrases used in this poema re very touchy and heart warming. a nice composition.

a lot of anguished images here.

Wonderful, more than that. Amazing imagery. 10 from me.

Great poem Sarwar ^.^ this gets a 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ i could imagtion a moon burning in the night sky

I enjoyed this detailed and dramatic poem, Sarwar. Keep writing and sharing. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

I enjoy the imagination in detail in this poem! nice write.10 :)

poem of the heading must be moon was burning...good imagination i like it & thank for read my poem also..

a poetic innovation...thanks for sharing, Sarwar...10

really innovative thought 10+

a swift write with a smooth ending a nice narrative piece

A refreshingly different passionate write, I enjoyed reading it, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

very poweful imaginary write with full of passion indeed....a very different style, whatever a poet see he/she see's it in a poetic way...thanks for sharing 10+ 'last night i put a candle on burning desires of life long' - aijaz

A very passionate romantic poem. U get 10++

creativity beyond narrated..well done... Ency Bearis

Very Intense, , Very Powerful... Let your passion burn on...

very well done...it was more than perfect.....i give 10 Hataw

very original style choudhury saab...very innovative indeed...and i too loved the notion of the moon transformed into verse...very poetic indeed...!

Good one, like everything about it.