Friday, August 18, 2006

((6) Hidden Wings Comments

Rating: 2.9

I´ve discovered angels
in her look.

Their moves reveal them too,
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

Lovely love poem. Love it.

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Will Barber 18 April 2009

A very tender write, Luis. Wings enough for a song of wings. - Will

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 September 2007

Great write with beautiful imagery thanks for sharing forsharing.............

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Betty Louise Keck 06 April 2007

What an extradinary write, , , eloquent lyrics, , , should be put to music. Your poet friend, Betty

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Yufen Liou 12 March 2007

when you are aware you have hidden wings, then there is hope, thank God!

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2006

Very lovely imagery. This is a poem worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente

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