Thursday, December 9, 2010

6 Feet Of Vertigo Comments

Rating: 5.0

I rise high before you erect like a skyscraper
Queasy and disoriented from amorous agitation
The power of your beauty has reduced me
constantly pounding me for steel sentiments
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Marcus McKinley
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Chris Blazo 13 August 2012

Portrays a good vision in my mind. Never to give up and holding it together is what i take from this one. You are a strong foundation wanting to crumble, but never does. Strong poem.

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