6-11 (True Story) Comments

Hi CRYSTAL - Lovely story - I have scored it ten just open the scoring with a MAX! It is what we call a POESIE VRAIE - A True Poem. Th1s poem isunique because only you could write it. When commenting on TRUE POETRY - which is very precious - we have to concede it is PERFECT as wriitten. I for one would not wish to alter a single word! The poem reminds us that even though we may have accidents, that can change the direction of our lives - each one of us is born with a PURPOSE. In your Biography you urge us to read 6-11 first and I'm glad I did - it is awesome. However you are a survivor and your wonderful story of survival and achievement wont stop me being objective about your poem 'I wish I was a donut'. I know you don't want us to make any concessions and this comes across in your postscript to 6-11. There is no metre or rhyme in 6-11 but I like the way you have set it out in the form of FREE VERSE. The short lines make it easy to read and the five stanzas give it an element of form. I'm going to be a little harder in my appraisal of 'Donut' because I know you would want that! The PH Family are lovely - very supportive - but sometimes they forget to score! Love in Poetry - JOHN.

excellently done...........truely nothing can stop you from doing what you really want to do......... Amazing stuff........keep going........ read my 'being an perfect individual'......kinda delivers somewhat same msg

This was nice while reading it I had no idea you were gonna say that u where that baby....God can bring any one from anything.....im so glad u survived and as far as the epilipse, just keep ur eyes on God hon. DIMPLzZ.