Saturday, June 13, 2009

6-11 (True Story) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A softball game,
With two 7th grade teams.
In a open grass field kids play,
In the hot sun.
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Mrs. Cynosure
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sky dreams 30 July 2009

Unlikely to walk, talk, feed herself.. to become a veggie.... to think one can overcome those sort of odds is truly inspirational... you are a brave and amazing person.. thank you for this inspiration

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Connie Leigh Lindsay 22 June 2009

Great poem.I'm sorry that happened to you but I am also glad that you shared it with us.You have helped me alot You are a great person and one I am glad to call my friend.

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Aijaz Asif 19 June 2009

its a very beautiful piece, a very different art of writing style and you wrote it very well...i will not say i feel sorry for what happened to you coz you are healthy now, i have many injuries during child hood, like my both arms had fractured many times, i can't turn my palms in upward directions and many mishaps which was done in past....it is said that 'when all the cure in the world ends then leave it to nature, coz nature is one of the biggest medicine in the universe....thanks 10++++++++++++ and A+++++++++ rgds asif

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