Thursday, March 12, 2020

5th Chorus Comments

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5th Chorus: This poem is an resolved crisis between people who are Poetry-Enthused and people who are Poetry-Apathetic. Hey, you people,
listen to some JAZZ: Get electrified.

On my walk around the upper level
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 20 March 2020

hey, brother daniel! i read choruses 1-4 first, then this. some stand out phrases for me there, and i'll back up and comment under those. on this one, i can hear this to jazz accompaniment. in the speech of the fox i remember walt's barbaric yawp, ferlinghetti's improvisations, and hear this new voice asserting his life, his self. on your superscription, is it " an unresolved..." or " a resolved..." ? -glen

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