5am. Comments

Another 9. I see this one, the same as the last. Ditto GW62

Peace for all those lost.This is such a powerful poem.It puts the reader in the centre of the action and there is so much sadness as we can almost feel the thoughts of the afflicted.Great write.You are a very tallented person and a highly valued poet in my opinion.love Duncan

This is an excellent portrayal of the battle of the Somme. The grief, misery and pain.

A very moving and well written piece of art. I enjoyed it's read immensely. Thank you very much for sharing....ams

i think it is really moving and i really glad you let us read it take care kelly

I think of the lines from a poem by Carl Sandburg in which a little boy said, something like this, 'Someday they'll have a war and nobody will come.'I am moved by this poem and thank you for writing it. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler