Thursday, October 5, 2017

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Lighting surges through my brain
electrifying every cell
nothing can even come close to matching
except the thunder within my heart
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bri edwards 01 January 2018

Lighting surges through my brain............Profanisaurus, i think you meant Lightning. :) Check the wording of your 3rd stanza. good luck 'seeking another'! ! ! HAPPY NEW YEAR! bri :)

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