Thursday, October 5, 2017

586. Bogatir Comments

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Bogatir kneels in prayer in the family Chapel
built by one of his forebears 300 years before
illuminated by tall white candles
his sword on the altar glitters under the dancing flames
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Bri Edwards 10 October 2017

favorite lines so far: the towering statues of his ancestors stare down at him in silent accusation and what you seek is within yourself as we will always be with you' and all the rest of the lines! to MyPoemList and eventually a showcase perhaps. a really nice one, Profanisaurus. have a snickerdoodle somersault applesauce afternoon, bri :)

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