Monday, March 20, 2017

559. No One Is Safe In Their Dreams Comments

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'We are safest in our dreams'
a huge lie I was once told as a child
'they wrap us up in a reassuring blanket
keeping us safe from harm'
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Jaden Knight
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 July 2017

Wow yes so true, I feel highly unsafe in dreams, anything the worst can happen, nightmares can be real torture. Enjoyed your fabulous darkish musing poem in great freeverse style. Kudos for how u express here. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will review my latest poem titled, 'For all cheese chums'

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