Monday, March 20, 2017

557. Aponi Comments

Rating: 2.5

They called her Aponi at birth
but she was known as the butterfly queen
constantly surrounded by flapping wings
without them she is never seen
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 20 April 2017

Yes, I can 'buy' the sad topic. Being alone can be tragic, and, that Aponi would be alone without those ever-present wimgs, is sad. But sadder still would be if the wings disappeared as well. Another very fine poem from you, Profanisaurus. To MyPoemList, and I may use it in May Showcase if you don't send one in the next few weeks Have a swizzle stick evening....with all the trimmings! Bri :)

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