Wednesday, May 6, 2009

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i see a broken man on a crooked stick
holding the hand of his wife thats sick
reach for a half empty packet
strike the match light the cigarette
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Jordan Crider
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Jordan Salinas 07 May 2009

I like your visualization, and imagery... You are a natural Walt

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