549. Your Switchblade Eyes Comments

She may have seen your pulsing, yearning heart, and felt she was not worthy of it. i hope your scar is not too gross! VERY NICE ONE, as i often find when i visit your poems. to MyPoemList. anything you would like in April's showcase, my friend? ? i'll give you a week or so to offer one before i steal one. all stanzas are great. this one might be a little more my favorite. hmm? Eventually you found something that frightened you and so you withdrew and ran away not bothering to give an explanation leaving me to cover up what you had exposed i like that both the first and last lines end with cut me open with your switchblade eyes bri :)