i like all the stanzas. let's suppose this is my favorite:
My guilt appears to have forged itself
into a heavy chain of steel
a collar has clamped around my neck
choking me with its weight
no rhyming OR humour/humor, YET i like it very much............the poem. thanks.
carry on, Hercules! i mean Profanisaurus.
this shall be the first poem displayed in Section C of my/our January 2017 'a showcase for PH poets' [found in my list of poems in PH].
and to MyPoemList.
bri :)
have a scintillating freedom from chains and whips and black net stockings, ............unless you LIKE those things! !
bri :)
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i like all the stanzas. let's suppose this is my favorite: My guilt appears to have forged itself into a heavy chain of steel a collar has clamped around my neck choking me with its weight no rhyming OR humour/humor, YET i like it very much............the poem. thanks. carry on, Hercules! i mean Profanisaurus. this shall be the first poem displayed in Section C of my/our January 2017 'a showcase for PH poets' [found in my list of poems in PH]. and to MyPoemList. bri :) have a scintillating freedom from chains and whips and black net stockings, ............unless you LIKE those things! ! bri :)